F-Stop's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Origin]

Very liquidy. I love this kind of stuff. So smooth and yummy that you just want to melt yourself inside of it forever and ever and ever!

Anyways, your tune has a nice chord progression. It's one of those songs where you could just have it on loop and not really care because it just works like that.

The only issue I think is that your snare has too much low EQ on it. Snares should really have a brighter end. Other than that, you have a pretty solid track. Feel free to drop a review on one of my tunes too! Keep it up. :)

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Geoplex responds:

The snare is mid-high EQd, I've actually cut most of the lows. I'll try to take it higher next time.

Thanks for the review!

[Janze - Shine on]

Playful, catchy, fun. The basics of any kind of happy techno song. Your melody is sweet and the rhythm section makes me want to jump up forever and ever.

I think a little more work has to be done on your chord progressions. Nothing hasn't really changed since the beginning. It will also be nice to hear some high end sounds coming in the background here and there, to spice things up a bit.

I guess since this is one of your old projects, I can't really say if you need this much critique on your track! Oh well, I just felt like writing a lengthy review for this one. :) Keep going, I want to hear more. Feel free to drop a review on one of my tunes too!

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